by MPHO GODFREY RAMOSHABA Mar 17, 2009
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
A voice of ambition |
A good write, while your repitition was an excellent use of words, I found that you used it a little too much. Drove the poem a bit too long though I liked how you included almost every injustice, and at the end wrapped it up with justice. 4/5 |