by Walter F Alvarado Mar 21, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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I want to cry |
by Aubrey
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Wow....this is what I am going through... I love it:) |
by Adelle
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This poem has real potential the surface feelings are explored with much honesty. I feel the poem has the potential to go deeper and to unearth that underlying cause. There are a couple of typos "thats seems to be taken over me" - That seems to have taken over me? Or that seems to be taking over me? "It doesn't feel normal I know is |