Comments : These Four Walls

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    *Tear*

    I feel the exact same way,
    I keep telling myself that my walls around me aren't gonna break, but they're of of the many things that do come crashing down around me.

    Stay strong gurl.
    x

  • 15 years ago

    by Fire Catches

    Another amazing poem.
    my fav. part was
    "These four walls, are stained with the secrets I could never tell
    Their words fell a story: my journey through hell"

    Great job. 10/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Dan

    That was pretty stunning. You just seemed to give off these powerful emotions that are screaming out at the reader.
    "But these once strong walls, are falling like the London Bridge
    And as my secrets escape for the world to see, all I can do is cringe"
    That one part made me realize how much sometimes we cringe when our secrets are exposed to the world. Stay strong through it all.

    -Dan