That was a really good poem! I think the layout could hav been better, buh thatz a minor problem, i reeeeeli lyked the last few lines.....very good writing :) read mi poemz if ya have time 2 =)

beautiful..and very touching..take care..Michelle :)

thanx for all ur comments guys, it means a lot 2 me.
fanx! :D

nice.

wow this is sooo good

Darn hun, was writen well. Lots of feeling.

very strong words...... loved every line and besides i can also relate its set out really well and flows well to! great job i am so sorry though no one should have to go through that..... but im here 4 ya and thanx so much for ya comment i will add u 2 my faves 2 lol excellent work!
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bec

I think tis poem is what my family is going through and you relate to me so so much so keep up the work

well if that's true i am very sorry. i had been very close to my father but he left a couple years ago. good poem...

I know what you meen every fathers day that passes by is just like a little blow in the face. you see everyone out with their daddys and mine doesnt even give a damn about me. he even went out the states so he wouldnt have to pay child support. it was worse when i was little and in school the art project was based on fathers day and i had to play along it was sad.

Awww wow so touching and emotional, its very good x x x x

Wow this is really good. I am so sorry. keep up the good work 5/5
xoxoxox
Jess

Very nice
The layout is a bit... I dunno it could be set up better
But the words, so full of emotion. Very touching and... I dunno
Im so sorry about your dad and all...

:/