I really am pleased wit this....i'm in that sate of mind i love this

LOVED IT
This poem is should be to all the bastards that lost us!!!!!
i loved the pain but the sarcasm was the absolute best!!!
truly great 100/5!!!
this poem was just what i needed today!!!

Such a sad poem, your emotion shines through , nobody should have to go through something like that. I really loved how you did the headng of the poem i havnt seen that idea used before, it's what attracted me to the piece =] Nice choice of wording used to