Not Jealous, Just Mad

by Not Enough   Mar 31, 2009


*** It's about me and my gf, (both girls)

To me jealousy is such a wasted emotion
I just thought I had your devotion
I'm not jealous, I'm just angry with you
How could you cheat on me then lie to me too

One year, three months, one week, six days
Is how long I've put up with your ways
My love for you is still here, it always will be
But I don't understand how you could lie to me

First you kiss her, and I couldn't care less
But you didn't tell me, I had to guess
You even told Cassidy, the girl that I hate
And I thought you were my soul mate

You can't be p*ssed because I kissed that guy,
Because I actually told you, I didn't lie,
I didn't go and tell somebody you hate
I even told you that day, I didn't wait

I didn't kiss him back; he was my best friend,
I may have liked it and I'm not going to pretend
But I would never be with him, no love felt here
And baby you didn't even shed a tear

Three days after the kiss, I found out more
This was a bigger lie about you and her
You were never going to tell me about this one
And all you said was "I'm sorry it can't be undone"

Why would I take you back after you f---ed her
And then you said that it was just a blur
That 'it just happened' and you didn't want it to
You lied to me twice, why would I believe you

It couldn't just happen, since it happened twice
"It just happened once"; you swore on my life
Well, gee, thanks, shows how much you care
This is something you just can't repair

Baby, I love you and I thought you loved me too
After you lied, I'll never be able to believe you
I will always love you, but it'll never be the same
Look in the mirror if you want someone to blame

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  • 15 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    Wow I like really like this poem alot. I like your detailed description of what leads to your break up. Though simple words was used here, but it really enables me as the reader to visualize the whole story.I like how you ended your poem. It just create an impact to the whole poem.Great Job

  • 15 years ago

    by Minkus

    4/5. This was an above-average poem, but I think to make it amazing you would need to read over it and edit it more for rhythm and fluency. You told the story very well, very clearly. Some of the rhymes were a bit weak due to how the phrases before and containing them are actually spoken--for example, the first couplet of the last stanza and the second couplet of the second stanza. Although the words at the ends of the lines rhyme well enough, the emphasis in the phrases makes it such that the rhymes aren't heard very strongly.

    Good work and keep at it. If you could get my most recent poems, I would appreciate it.

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wow this was an amzing piece. your emotions were right on it. your words were ful of you on them. anger and love at the same time is sumthing very strange and unique at the same time. i realie like this cuz i can relate. i dnt love him cuz as sum we move on and hope you can to. flow was prettie good to. your words i wouldnt change them. great job.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 15 years ago

    by Nanita

    This is deep. The message is very well put and to the point. It flowed very well but as someone already mentioned adding syllables would make it even better. Well done (:

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    It is an amazing poem! I love the message in it (I am sorry that this happened to you though).. But I also feel that some of your rhymes are forced, I would advise maybe to start writing some poems that doesn't rhyme rather than rhyming and it doesn't turn out good. Just a personal opinion!

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