Comments : I want to just give up

  • 15 years ago

    by Jad

    You got your message threw clearly and I liked your flow and also there will always be someone somewhere to help you. good job. Keep your head up.

  • 15 years ago

    by MissMana

    Very good poem i liked how you laid it out...like jad said there is/or will be someone that will help you...you have to let yourself...if you stay stuck in the paast you wont be able to grow therefore you will just end up more broken then before...keep writing!...S.M.I.L.E