Rejection

by xXHunnyGurlXx   Apr 6, 2009


Ive loved you since forever,
And would have asked you long ago,
But I feared so many things,
And I was to scared to let you know.
Rejection..
The one thing I know will hurt,
Thats why I never told a soul,
About my love for you,
But it only grew from silver to gold.
Rejection..
I tried to ignore it,
I knew that you werent the one for me,
I cant find love, my heart is locked,
And you have the only key.
Rejection..

I feel that this poem is unfinished but i thort id post it anyway. any comments or tips wud be greatly apprechiated & i wud gladly return the favour.
Thanks.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    I liked it, could use a little more emotions, as rejection...I've been there, and still searching for that one after 4 years, rejection, rejected? yes I'm still there

    Keep up the good work