Really bad poem ; doesn't have a name

by CareBear   Apr 7, 2009


She smiles just to hide the pain
He tells he she's not allowed to feel
Anything she's meant to feel

He tells her not to speak a word
Just put up with what he wants,
Be the perfect girl who lets him

Run around and play these stupid games.
Smile just to hide the pain
Don't cry this time, he's not worth the time

Love is torture in her mind
He tells her what she wants to hear
Then rips it all away

He seems to forget that it was her,
That gave him another shot at love,
He doesn't care that she's ready to leave

He thinks he has it all this time,
She couldn't tear him apart again
But she will, if he keeps this up

She's not a toy, but she's been treated
As one for much to long
He smiles as he looks into her eyes

She pulls her gaze away and looks
Past him into the rain
He thinks he's got it all

But he's about to loose it again.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Aish

    What are you talking about??? really bad poem??? this is great! The style's different to most of your other stuff, but the message and theme is expressed realllllyyyyy well.
    I love it

    5/5

    aish
    xx

  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    This is not a bad poem. i loved it. I felt so much when i read. very deep and emotional. keep it up. Shanik

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