A Touch of Magic

by Momma   Apr 8, 2009


You walked by, I started to stare
I felt the magic in the air
I sat and dreamt of your touch
The one I wanted so very much

It has always been so tragic
Always dreaming of a touch of magic

I wonder sometimes if you dream too
Of what could happen between us two
If you feel the love I have inside
It's so strong it just can't hide

It's all so very tragic
Now wanting a touch of magic

But you don't notice all of this
It's true that ignorance is bliss
You walk on by without a look
And I rebury my nose in my book

It will always be so tragic
Always needing a touch of magic

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  • 16 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow-i think this is really sweet yet sad.
    very easy to read-flow is constant throughout and rhyme is good and not too forced.

    repitition works well-nice technique.

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    aish
    xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "I wonder sometimes if you dream too
    Of what could happen between us two"
    `I did not like these lines, you can obviously tell that the rhyme is forced throughout most of the poem and these two lines it obvious. Too and two have two different meanings, yet they dont even rhyme..

    I did however kind of like your touch of repetition.

    I dont know if it was just me but I wasnt too much of a fan of this one..must of been the rhyming. I prefer free-verse, cause rhyming is forced way too often..and when it becomes visible the poem kind of just falls apart..

    I think this poem was just okay.. maybe thats just me..

    Temps.
    [Beyond a Poets Mind]

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