Dying Slowly

Ohhh I liked this line
"Dead already
Hands unsteady"

Don't stop writing! you're an awesome writer!!

I thought this poem was very well written good job

& sometimes the less you say says even more

This was a good write. Not incredibly excellent in my perspective, the words were vague and more emotion is something I'd love to see you describe.

'Dead already
Hands unsteady'

^ This is my favourite line. This work leaves much for imagination and creativity, perhaps even abstract.