Comments : Sleep Dear Angel

  • Wow that is so beautiful i loved it.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Aww this is sweet. I liked it. Nice work. Shanik

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I liked this.
    Short and sweet.Down to the point.
    I liked this alot!!
    Great job hun!
    5/5
    Take care,
    -Kortney

  • 10 years ago

    by Cayce

    Aww. That was so sweet. It was a little short, but I saw it as someone saying it to someone they loved right before they go to sleep. So adorable. :]

    Great job.

    Cayce

  • 10 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    Be happy, and without fright
    For I shall be there, to tuck you in at night.

    awwwwwwwww so so so cute!!!!! i love it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Courtney Hough

    Be happy, and without fright
    For I shall be there, to tuck you in at night.

    awwwwwwwww so so so cute!!!!! i love it 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Iris

    Yes!! i loved it as well!! ^ ^ very well done!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Aww its sweet. I have one similar to this but you convey your meaning well. good job5/5
    -laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Heart-warming! It makes me want to go cuddle someone.

  • 10 years ago

    by LIGURE

    Wow.. short but nice.. :]

  • 10 years ago

    by Hollow Emotion

    Its aweosme... and i love how it ended!! great job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Samuel Dimafelix

    I love it... i never wrote a love poem hope i can write love poem.. short but full of meaning.. keep it up. love is in the air.

  • 9 years ago

    by victoria

    Wow...for a short poem that was very very deep. i felt it. The way i viewed the poem it was kinda like a guy losing his loved one in death and hes telling her things will be okay. a very...forever lasting love.
    wonderful.

    victoria