Numbers and shapes

This is wonderful theres a lot u understand and u openly show us how great u are but still i sense a big of clutterness in ur brain u really want get things out in the open good luck i think ur doing great

I love all of your poetry.
the ones i read anyways.
:))
this poem in by far my favorite though.
I dont know why, it just is.
dont stop writing, you have some real potential.

And it would be greatly appriciated if you could comment and rate one of my poems.
thanks love!

-jesss.
Btw:: Im putting you in my favorites ;)

This piece is beautiful.
I really love the line " lying in a pool of numbed concentration "
It spoke to me, because i feel i have been in the exact same place so many times before.
really nice job.

This was amazing, enjoyed everything about this, it was short and to the point, great job. i like how you make shapes and numbers and emotions blend, again great job

-(M3) LL0 oneninethree

I like this poem.. I had tro read it twice to try to understand but i think i finally got in the end.. I also feel that it is open for interpretation.. This was my favourite part; "hating square as only a triangle can" =)