Glorious Spring

Beautifully descriptive and alive with the sights sounds and smells of Spring!

Awesome write with nicely flowing verses and impeccable rhyming...nice!

It took way too long to get here, spring finds ways of being so elusive. You did a great job here and the imagery was good and words placed just right to give us the glimses into what spring means to you and to most of us. Hope you like summer as well. peace

The sun peers in my window
Cardinals in the pines
Sing the song of springtime
Morning glories grow on vines
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The imagery is delightful in your opening stanza Rachel. The sun, birds, flowers ... beautiful !

Nature at my doorstep
Squirrels burying their find
Blue jays in the bushes
Noises I don't mind
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I love the first line here ... just gives me a wonderful image of opening your door and watching a beautiful scene unfold.

So many fragrances to smell
Feel the gentle breeze
Touch the many blossoms
See nature change the trees
Glorious Spring!
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Your ending is brilliant. I love how you have smell, feel, touch, see .... and through your words I see a glorious Spring.

Awesome read Rachel, thanks for sharing

Good job! That was a very lovely ode to springtime, my favorite verse was the first one. Refreshing (:

Congrats on winning the Spring Fling contest.....Awesome poem :)
Love Aunt Cindy