Rainfall

by Beautiful Chaos   Apr 17, 2009


Tears are falling down like rain
Landing on my window pane
Dripping droplets play a beat
Remindful of my heart's defeat

Will it ever dull the storm
This love I long to keep me warm
Sunshine in my world of gray
That lingers though I've gone astray

Puddles form beneath my feet
Life will never be complete
Until I learn to walk away
Or swim into the light of day

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  • 15 years ago

    by A New Beginning

    Great job. i enjoyed it. its short and emotional. very nice

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    "Tears are falling down like rain"
    `I'm going to be completely honest with you and tell you this was a bit too cliche for me.. its a wonderful simile but definatly very overused and was wondering if theres another way of putting your thoughts.

    "Dripping droplets play a beat
    Remindful of my heart's defeat"
    `Loved your alliteration of dripping droplets, and loved how you said they played a beat, I found that to be very unique. Great rhyme scheme, simple but works nicely with your poem. Good flow.

    Overall a sad write, but well written. I thought you worded things very simply but it was nice to actually be able to understand that the poem without the interference of words one wouldnt normally understand.

    Well done.
    5/5.

    Temps. [Beyond a Poets Mind]

  • 15 years ago

    by AnCi

    This is a cute poem. Short and straight to the point. The flow is good as well.

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