In the dark I lay

by Joseph R Hanna   Apr 24, 2009


In the dark I lay
and the mark of love will stay
forever in my heart
though you don't lay with me
I've etched you name on my bed
so are love could convey our live.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Brenda

    Short, yet simple :] I loved it. so raw and the length couldn't be more perfect for this kind of message. great job! 5/5

    :]

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    This poem is so short but so to the point. Very cute

  • 14 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    This is very sweet<3
    short, simple, but super sweet<3
    i love it [=

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