Buddha nature - Haiku

by John Long   Apr 26, 2009


The dried up leaf blown
Crab like across concrete beach,
Never born, can't die.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Melissa

    Perhaps the best haiku I've read on here... So deep for 3 little lines.

    Great work and thanks for sharing! :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very thought provoking, And it's as though it's understandable at the same time - though I couldn't tell you exactly what it means! Sort of like Jabberwocky!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    John as always you seem to posess that special something to say so much in a few lines. Your words are always magical and this brings a hint of sadness. I loved the title as well. Awesom Job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Jackie

    A short but good poem Mr B,
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Well John..this certainly is a very deep Haiku!
    You impressed me deeply..hats off for you, my friend.

    It did make me a little sad reading it, I could see it in front of me, such a gloomy picture..

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid