Comments : Undesired thoughts

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The quotes are perfectly woven into the deep theme of this eloquently penned poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Excellent write Lisa, the flow was flawless. I really liked the way you worded this and your choice of words was perfect. Good luck on the contest. ;]

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by Austin

    That was a pretty well written piece of work. I noticed the quotes as I was reading which made it interesting. Although I won't give a huge analysis of the poem, I must say I did enjoy reading it. The quotes added onto the edgy topic sort of gave it an "epic" type of feel, for me at least. Good job, keep writing.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Stunning poem Lisa, your wording and flow were right on target and I thought this was a very unique and interesting poem to read. I'm glad I read it, take care and keep up the excellent work!

    5/5 from me, good luck with the contest!

    God Bless You!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 14 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I thought this piece was very interesting, your wording was flawless =] The structure of poem suited the flow perfectly! Te quotes you used fitted in very well with your style,oveall a really good write 5/5