Bee Line

by Corinne   Apr 27, 2009


I spied them up ahead
So I made a bee line
Along with the other bees
Repeating
My heart beating:
"Lilacs! Lilacs! Lilacs!"

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  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Oh aren't they beautiful. I think after the long winter any sign of spring and we are all like bees buzzing going straight to the source. What a delightful poem. Great Job

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    What a unique poem, the bees lined in a row on their way to the lilacs. Beautiful imagery, although a short poem.

    5/5.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Corinne
    I can smell them now :)
    Wonderful!
    ~hugs~
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Not only a nature poem but the image of bees on their way to lilacs along beside you, that makes me smile. Lilacs are wonderful. Good job.