Submitt to the dying

by Fatal   Apr 28, 2009


My life is short
my death is soon
my mind i cant sort

stop the ongoing crowd from staring & saying wow.
end the this suffering
ill just end it now.

no one cares
its a conscious decision.
that i can bare

its my shortest poem to date..but when your feeling an emotion so strong...the most complicated way to explain it is the simplest way.....

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  • 14 years ago

    by FlyFF

    Ok thats deep....

    flyff<3

  • 15 years ago

    by Steady Stereotype

    THis was a simple poem indeed, though it was in many ways short and sweet. Though at the same time I found that the lack of lines took away from this work somewhat. 4/5

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