This was a very realistic poem and it was great. The emotion in the poem was wonderful. The imagery of the poem was also good as well. The flow and rhyme were good as well. Overall you did a great job on your poem.

This is a very emotionally penned piece. I also entered this contest. I believe you deserve the prize. Each stanza held a remarkable sense of knowledge. A lot of poems in this nature seem to deal with the same feelings. But you enabled many different sorts of passion and love. It's so terrible to have to experience a disease like cancer. Many times people overlook the young children who have it. This poem reminds me of the movie Patch Adams. I seem to see Robin Williams tucking the child in with a bright red nose on. And you wanted the child to have an abundance of laughter. It helps sooth the soul. Great Job my dear. This was beautifully depicted.
Bravo.
*applauds*

-Lilium