What a vivid image, I can see the swans now, in fact I did Saturday. Well done.

Superb description. Vivid imagery. Thats all I can describe about the haiku. Awesome piece of work.

Regards,
Bhavin

Loved the sibilance here, it gives a hushed sound to the wording, the benefit of including French here was nice as swans are romantic and obviously the language is romantic. Could include a translation though :) good write.

Resplendid Write!!!

A unique write, including the french bit! You both work so well together, I am speechless with what you to come up with! Excellent work, I adore reading your works and am privileged to know such a great poet and friend. Have a good Sunday night!

~MaryAnne

Beutifully penned.An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Wow! That's fantastic! Awesome description... Very well done!