Comments : Summer Dance (Haiku)

  • 14 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This form of poetry is surely very artistic as u hv so much to express with so little and its like painting so many pictures with little colors. This is an amazing poem indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 14 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Very well written Cindy. I love your choice of words.

    hugs
    shobhana

  • 14 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That is a gentle & soft image for the mind
    to relaxe with...lovely write, I liked it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Another gentle poem. I can see the daisies now blowing in the wind in a field. Well done, Cindy.

  • 14 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Few words hold the most meanings sometimes. I enjoy this type of poem because of the feelings it give. It left me thinking of the warm, hot days that is head of us. Well done 5/5, kel.

  • 14 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    A breathtaking haiku, this was quite a pleasure to read. Your wording was so flawless and created so much imagery! Great work, keep it up! 5/5 from me, take care....

  • 14 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Brings to mind endless lazy sunner days...basking in the sun....nice.

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    No challenge is too big for your overly tallented mind mind Cindy.
    This beautiful Haiku has proven that.
    An enjoyable read.
    Paul...

  • 14 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Dear Cindy,
    what a lovely piece of art .5/5.The best part -it reflects your positive outlook. The summer dance of blooming daisies.Beautiful.Swing with fullness of life.Lots of love.God bless.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Gorgeous write, I can picture this bright yellow daisy swaying in the light breeze.. makes me want summer to be here already!
    Brilliant.. :]

    Well done!
    5/5.
    Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

  • 14 years ago

    by SADADDY

    What a Picture you paint with your words. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day.

    sadaddy

  • 14 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow with so little words, you managed to capture the essence of daisies. It really allows me as the reader to visualize the picture which you have painted. Indeed you have set the mood even for me to bask in the sun.

    Brilliant

  • 14 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    This is so beautifully put, it's like art. I loved the imagery and flow in it.