Accepting the gift of love that overflows the hearts
Awaken flame which makes no other pleasure feels the same
A complete satisfaction of wholeness
That goes beyond physical attraction to a deeper commitment

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Beautifully put, Kel:)

Indeed the test of time will determine if a love is true and profound or just a passing phase ( infatuation)
From your words it's easy to see that with you it is indeed love profound:) Well done.

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

A beautiful love poem by you. Lingering glances, you know when you see the one you are meant to love with that glance.

Kelleyana
What a lovely poem of love.

Bodies so close while we shared a romantic dance, a sensation Like a hypnotic trance
Our heart takes over and emotions conquered the rest
Searching for comfort, I rest my head upon his chest
Feeling the pounding of his heart that beats only love for me.

When we find out true love we know it right away. There is no need for words between the two. A touch a glance says it all.
Great job!
((hugs))
Cindy

This beautiful imagery takes me to my seventh heaven as I am what is known as a hopeless romantic and this poem flowed right into my heart

This poem was one that i've seen many many times. You did something different with your opening statement though, you went A, A, A, A. Which is refreshing.

I like the poem but felt that there was too much polyslavic mutlible polyslavic words in there at times, i felt it was almost force.

That being said. I enjoyed the poem and felt that you did a good job, but the style was both good and bad, it threw me off but also took away from the poem at points as well.

Oh, the Power of A Glance, The Magic Held in Eyes, Such Passion, Promise, Held in Simply Glances. Wonderful Write, Enjoyed Kel!!!