Yesterday

Crabapple tree, on the climb
Penny candy now a dime
Doors unlocked, it was okay
Memories of my yesterday

*This was my favorite part :) I love the imagery you used throughtout the poem, very intresting and strong. Great poem. I enjoyed reading it. Nik*

Well done good word flow and imagery.

What can I say! This one touched me! Wonderful poem! Full of emotion and very nostalgic. Repetition of the last line made it more rhythmic.

Some memories of our 'yesterday' never die.
And once again I loved your poem!

Rachel
This is a beautiful poem.

Times have changed, feelings not
Some now gone, but none forgot
Reflecting with a fondness today
On memories of my yesterday

So many of my yesterday memories include you.......I still see that beautiful curly haired little girl running around with that beautiful smile....saying "I Love you Aunt Ninny"

Love you Rachel
Aunt Cindy

This poem is absolutely amazing, I like how you reminisce the fond memories that you had of your past. You made the memories of yesterday feel fresh as if it just happen moments ago.I also like the idea of how you repeatedly used 'Memories of my yesterday'
through out your stanza. It did work for me and the rhyming was fantastic.

Excellent Job