Regally Shine (Haiku)

by Mr. Darcy   May 27, 2009


Rugged rock face slips,
revealing a sequined dance.
The jewel in the crown.

M. Moran
27.05.09
12.10

Haiku - A Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables. Haiku often reflect on some aspect of nature.

Inspired by Miss Take

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Haiku's are fun. I think you had a fun time writing this because it shows. This is a really beautiful piece. Very lovely wording. Keep it up. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    You did a wonderful job on this Haiku :)

    (((Hugs)))
    Cindy

  • 14 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Lovely haiku there... beautiful words :)

  • 14 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Well done again. Rugged rock, could be a man or a rock. Face slips, the water washes the rock clean or the man's face falters to reveal himself, the jewel in the crown. Either way man or rock, you did a very good job with this.

  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Darcy, this is a marvelous write! I wish I had the ability to write something like this.. definatly far from a cliche or plain haiku, youve out done yourself here.. I loved this one because it made you think a little, and it was interesting to interpret it.

    Great job (:
    5/5.

    Temps!

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