Wow!
and i mean Wow! that was a fantastically brilliant piece of poetry. Reading it was like reading true emotion. I loved every stanza. everyone of them was amazingly written.

My simple story ends here
But unlike it, I can not disappear.
Forever I'll remain stationary with my broken wings
I'm the caged bird, now you know why I sing.

I loved this ending aswell. I just think its a great end to a brilliant poem I just can't believe someone gave this anything less than a 5 out of 5.

Loved it daz all i can say

I love the last four stanzas the most, the feeling i felt from this poem were powerful and a motin picture moved through my head. Nice work

Very well written :)

Charming! I really love it, its just made my favourite's list.
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Lovely,lovely lovely.
And the ending made a huge impact on me,
The nostalgy is so pure in this poem..
Well done Nikkiee!!! You go girl!

This was perfect, i cant even pick a favorite line, very deep

Wow, I cans ee why u hav so many rates and comments on this poem, its amazing! The end of thefirst stanza leads you in well and each line pulls the reader further in. The closing line braught it all to a wonderful end. Good work.