Comments : Chip on my shoulder

  • 14 years ago

    by DerXLoveIsDeadX

    <3 Love you babe

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    This was well written poem. The flow was good as well as the rhyming. You made your emotion in this poem noticed as well as your message your giving. The imagery in this poem was good to and that is what made your poem that much better. Good job.