Comments : Departing The Remastered (Septolet)

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Indeed you created a picture with your good word choice and the subject of which you talked about. This was another great poem that was masterfully made and is a great work of art or poetry. Good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very interesting Septolet here

  • 14 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Great job on this form. I like your word choice. Thought provoking!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Usually I find small poems aren't as powerful, but by the time I got to the last line I really loved it. I have this thing about science and I liked how you added that in. It was great.

    Five.