I like Tanka poem because they are always short. I enjoyed it and felt that it was conforming to the style.

Good job, I know that it's hard to write these from time to time.

A excellent tanka, I love how you described the color, this was so unique and beautiful. Lightning is sure a stunning thing to watch! You mastered this form, good job. Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne

Great natural imagery in this well written Tanka

It paints a pretty picture. :]

Five out of five.

How simple yet beautiful, well done!