No more!

by waiting for the unknown   Jun 13, 2009


I can't take it anymore!!!
I'll never get a break!
Tie me down
let me lose
Trip me in my wake.
"Get up!"
"Sit down!"
"move faster!"
"GO! GO! GO!"
"Dont' give up!"
"Give up..."
"you don't even know!"
I'm sick and tired of all of these peoples voices
ringing in my ears!
All I want to do is sleep
for a hundred thousand years!
I can't take it any more!
I'm done being bossed around!
It's my turn for me to live my life
if u don't like it turn and leave town
you judge without knowing
you gossip without cause
You couldn't care less
if you were causing me stress!
So mind you own god damned business
leave me the hell alone!
go ruin someone elses life!
I have to sit here and fix my own.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I'm not sure what to say about this one. It blew me away. I could feel the anger and sadness in this piece so well. I also love how you used the all caps words to put emphasis on how you were feeling. I think that really makes your poem stand out more. I love how honest and pure your feelings were. I think those emotions make the best poems. Really great job hun. I'm enjoying your work alot. Nik

  • 14 years ago

    by Snowdrop

    Beautiful, love the emotion you put in this. :)