This is an awesome poem!!!.

I feel you did a fantastic job with your choice of words. The metaphors blended perfectly in a smooth flow that accented your thene

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This poem is really good. i always love how you play with words . keep it up.

I loved the imagery!! I loved how I felt it all with you! Great structure and it moved along perfectly!! GREAT WORK 5/5

This is a very well thoughout poem.. i loved reading it.. just the way to read it makes it seem so alive.. 5/5..

I like this poem alot!!!
it kinda reminds me of when me an my bf fight, lol.

you truly have a gift,
and this poem flowed well and i enjoyed reading it

-->Jess<--

This is great. I like music poems and reading this one i can say you're a talented music writer. I like the feeling it gives. I've not only read the words but sing it also. Very well done 5/5, kel.

This is a great poem great job nik it had awesome words an d it painted a great picture

I love the creative repetition you used for the first two lines of each stanza. Your poem showed great flow as well as an interesting topic. A healthy mix of straight foreward thoughts and slight metaphors, this was a well written piece. Well Done.