Why am I suffering now?

by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not   Jun 16, 2009


I've waited for so long just to hold you,
You left and there was nothing I could do,
Now I'm suffering more than ever,
I just want to be with you forever.

I know there are times when I'm not there,
Just knowing that, my tattered heart is left to tear,
You are probably getting sick of the way I am,
You're out of my league, "Why do you give a damn?"

I look at you, and then look at me,
"How can you like me?" I Don't see,
When you go, I'm left to think and worry,
"How long..? " Before you leave me in a hurry.

Don't get me wrong, I love you a lot,
But I'll be the one you went and forgot,
All these thoughts taking over my head,
Conquering all the nice things you have said.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    A brilliant poem about love. I really liked this one :] Well written and expressed..
    Keep writing!

  • 14 years ago

    by Jacqueline Bautista

    WOWW!!
    this is one of the best poems i've read:)
    i can atually feel wat ur feeling n i think
    it flows rlly good...
    i rlly love this part:

    I look at you, and then look at me,
    "How can you like me?" I Don't see,
    When you go, I'm left to think and worry,
    "How long..? " Before you leave me in a hurry.

    it rhymes but it also shows the emotion n fear
    you're feeling from jux thinking bout her
    leaving you....
    well i love this poem:]
    keep on writting!! :D

  • 14 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Wow i love this 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Rowena Smith

    Hay i like this poem it had a rhytmn and rhyme keep up the good work!

  • 14 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    This is a really good poem. Your words flowed beautifully. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

    Keep up the great work

    5/5

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