My heart swears it has no need,
but I know it to be wrong.
^^I think these lines would look better if you'll rephrase them like:
My heart swears it has no end
And i know it, im never wrong..

But you did impress me with the message behind this song.Keep writing..

I can definitely relate to this piece. It's a nonstop
challenge to find that one true love. We search in every direction not knowing exactly where to look or what to look for. I can vehemently proclaim that it is not easy. It's a battle. You'll wage war's against other's. It will be a long journey. For however many loves you have lost there will be little found. Search with your heart. Open your eyes to people you see as too boring. It's never simplistic. Love is a hard road to travel. Just stay on the right path. Have faith in love. Love will find you in the outcome. I loved this song. It was very canny and cunning. The different format and structured climax. It held a beautiful meaning. Love is what both partners should have. Very nice.

5/5

-Lilium

Ahhh. Another perfect write. And the fact that it was a song makes it even more sweet. I loved it. But the suggestion Miren made wasnt a bad one.
Great Job. 5/5

Ahhh. Another perfect write. And the fact that it was a song makes it even more sweet. I loved it. But the suggestion Miren made wasnt a bad one.
Great Job. 5/5

Ahhh. Another perfect write. And the fact that it was a song makes it even more sweet. I loved it. But the suggestion Miren made wasnt a bad one.
Great Job. 5/5