Ravens' Passion

by Cate Rock   Jun 22, 2009


A safe haven,
Protected by the raven.
All the world mistaken,
My dearest love, the raven.

Drained but beating,
My heart unfleeting.
Death to all thats lost,
Forever my raven, The boss.

Shaped in silk,
Draped in filth,
Yet my raven excepts the torn soul...

My dearest raven,
Speak to me?
Tell me sweet lies
Reveal the hidden spies!

My dearest beloved,
Why can't you see?
I am made for you,
As you're made for me...

My sweetest raven,
You speak not.
But i feel your words....
The pulse within me,
They fill my dark world.

My darling Raven,
Send me in the wind,
Cast me out and watch my journey began.

My lovely raven,
I speak now of my love for who?
My raven, i shall forever worship you.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Very interesting and pretty deep i think u did a great job!!

  • 14 years ago

    by x3 TinyDancer3000 x3

    Very well written! Nice flow and rhythm to it. Nice job! 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Love Panda

    >>most of this poem was very well worded and intence, which is always a good thing, but some lines are forced and its clear they are forced, have another look over and see if you would change anything - if your having trouble with rhyming there is a button at the top between articles and FAQ's that could help you out.<<

    Well done on a good piece of work.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Elliott Lica

    A magnificine rythem, tho i have to agree with another comment the last two paragraphs seem a little heavy, but all in all...Brilliant!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Cindy Miller

    Wow! Now this is a great piece. you difinitly
    hit the heart here. Good Job! 5/5

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