Owch, you're breaking up with your girlfriend like that? Wow that would hurt through a poem. I gave you a 5 because it is well put together, unlike most of the poems on this site. But yeah, just giving my input. I know i'd be hurt if a guy sent that to me.

Wow..
i would say is a great poem. I'm giving you a 5 as well. but.. i think that maybe it is a lil bit too strong for you to give this to your girl. It's a verry good poem though. Keep it up and good luck.

So much emotion came through you would have had to experienced this situation or place yourself in the shoes of someone who has

Well done

Hey, this is another really good poem. The flow did seem off in some places, and in the second line, second stanza, 'away' would probably be better then 'apart', but thats just what i think... =] Overall, a neat poem, with a neat message, put across whilst keeping the readers attention till the end....i'm sure many can relate...keep writing...take care...MEZi x

Someday you can try to understand
But right now I know that you won't

*I can really relate to what you were saying here. I know what it's like to love someone and have them not understand what that love does to you. Love is a very stong and complicated emotion. But in your poem you express your love and pain so clearly. The flow was simple and helped make this a heartbreaking poem. Very nice work here. Nik*

Okay, honestly, this was so good it leaves me speechless. =). The rhythm was great, and I thougt it had good imagery. I just LOVED it! =D!

--Hannah

This is I can relate, ha it's funny because it's true. Great writing.