Wow, this is really sad, and the thing that makes it so sad, is for some, its true. I hope this didnt happen to you.

The flow was awesome, and the repetivness of "Daddy's little princess
Daddy's shooting star" followed by two different lines made it awesome.

Great job, keep it up! 5/5

Aww..such a heartbreaking poem. It reminds me of a poem I just wrote about the same situation. I really hope this isn't based off of something real...that would be awful. Even though this was such a sad poem, you used such lovely words to portray such ugly feelings. I think this is one of your best. I love your stuff. Keep it up ^.^ Nik

Though the theme is very disturbing this is well written and should be written to raise awarenes of the unthinkable

Wow...
i think this is a rlly good poem...
it's rlly sad and full of true feelings
it also flows rlly well and is veryy original.
i think you truly have talent so you should
keep on writting..
loved it!!! 5/5

Wow, this poem is so beautifully written, and so sad and heartbreaking!! i hope its not true... i really enjoyed the repitition, it seemed really well organised, with a nice flow and simple but effective rhyme scheme. The message was clear, and it never went off point and although its long, it never became boring. Overall, a great poem! Dont stop writing...take care...MEZi x

You did a very nice job on this poem. the flow and rhyme, was good, it got off a little in certin parts, but it still sounded like it belonged. It was lovely overall.

Thanks guys.

Hi! Soda,
I find poems and verse with such graphic details very disturbing and even more so when I find it written by a 14 year old. Unfortunately as you know this happens daily in our world though I am glad to say good things happen more often only they are very rarely given the headlines they deserve.
Your poem is very well written with great flow and meter it surprised me that a young girl of 14 could write with such an old head very well done, excellent 5/5 Ray S

Omq.. :(
good poem tho ..

Really sad but touching. You're a great writer.. I'm sorry that this is mostly a true story.

Thannkks.

Wow, amazing poem. Very sad but unfortunatley true in todays society :(