Waiting

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Jul 4, 2009


Sitting on the ground
waiting for your call.
Waiting on the call
to save me.

Taking my last breath
sitting by the phone.
By the time you call
I will not be home.

I put the gun to
my head.The clock
strikes midnight
This is our last fight.

Look at what you've
done to me.I was waiting
on the words,The words
you never said.

You left me here,here on the
floor.You knew my secret
I was rotten to the core.

You were my last hope,
but being with you i
realized my life was a joke.

My tears flow free
now I'm done,Your just
as proud as you can be.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    I liked the write it was pretty well done and the flow wasn't bad either. You missed a couple words I think like in the 5th stanza, I think you meant to say "on the floor" ... sometimes adding or subtracting a word or two from the poem can make it a lot better. Always capatalize "I" as well :) It was a good right though and the message is well relatable to all... great job 5/5

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