Comments : Life's a Love Poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wonderful write Krista, I fully enjoyed reading this piece from you. It held such warmth and came straight from the heart. Keep up the amazing work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 14 years ago

    by kevin Boundy AKA the ghost

    Absolutely loved this poem! the message was well said lol i feel the same way. the emotion was excellent and i loved the vocab. most people tend to over do it to try to sound smart and they screw up the poem but you did it perfect. the flow was amazing as well 5/5 keep it up.

    p.s p.m me sometime :)

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    I love it!! It was a wonderful write!
    I loved this part: "
    I'm just a hopeless romantic, finding my way to total bliss."

    I also loved the ending:
    "Life's like a well penned love poem,
    emotions and memories swaying on pale parchmen "

    -Never thought of things that way and your poem pointed that out to me! Great job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Sora

    A wonderfully written piece! Touching, and so pure. I love poems that readers can relate too, and this is one of them. You express yourself well through your work. And the title was eye catching, i had to read it. Job well done 5/5


  • 13 years ago

    by Unknown Substance

    I know exactly how you feel,i looove this poem 5/5!!!!