This was really short and simple but written well. Ruby red - nice alliteration.. other than that not much I can say with this but good job.

You have captured the essence of a kiss with your words. Well done.

I loved this Ingrid, it was so short and simple, yet there was much meaning in each line. I loved how you managed to put such few words, but create such a picture in my mind. Well done, take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne

What an enjoyable read!

"Light as a feather

was the touch of

ruby red ecstasy,

soft and moist,"

- Those were my favorite lines.

Very powerful words! You have a wonderful way of seeing things; it's so refreshing to read. Also, I enjoyed the way you placed your stanza's, it gave it a nice visual effect.

- mandy :)

Short and sweet as the kiss itself..Your description of that wonderful act of love is quite vivid my friend.
A beautiful and warmth write.An enjoyable read.
Paul...

Few words which define the magic of a kiss. Some dreams are so vivid that it seems like the reality. I always admire your writing styles. For me, almost all your poems are a win, as each one you painted a picture that i can actually see the colors and actions in it. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

Your poem made a kiss very appealing and sensual. A short but powerful poem
Enjoyable

So beautiful and i love imagery. i want this kiss!! great job :) 5/5 katiekins

Exquisite, A Wonderful Write Ingrid!!!

A very sensual poem here Ingrid, and ends with a promise of greater delights to come!
Very exciting prose here!
I liked this.