Wow, I really like this poem because it's so true. I agree with your words and I can really relate. I'm sure everyone has gone through heart break and learned from it. But I wish you made it into a stanza form instead of a big paragraph :/ but other than that, it was great! Keep it up! :]

Aweh this is really good;
5/5 I would really appreciate it if you
would read/comment/rate my new poem "I need you." Thank you! (:

I really like it.
Alot its very true. and i love the ending its very profound.
--Tania