A Wish

by Daniel Milano   Jul 23, 2009


A thought, A craving,
While you gaze up at the stars,
Diamonds scattered in the sky,
But baby, someday they will be ours.

A need, the spark of desire...
A Wish.
Attraction, it's the start to the fire...
The Kiss.
All senses awakened with soft, tingly sensations...
The Rain.
Stinging, the sharp, never forgotten...
The Pain.
A thirst, a taste, a tease you need...
The Lust.
The feel, the pleasure, like Ecstasy...
The Touch.

The struggle, the relationship, the Love, it's...
A Risk.
The bond, a connection, the Love, it starts with...
A Wish.

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  • 12 years ago

    by losing myself

    This is a really good poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Brenda

    This really did bring a tear to my eye. you have an amazing gift, and amazing talent. you really can tell that you are a poet at heart :]
    wonderful write. the emotion was 100% there and the structure of this couldn't be more perfect. keep it up!

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Excellent!!!! i Love it great job, alot of passion behind it

  • 14 years ago

    by Love is a Beautiful Thing

    Excellent!!!! i Love it great job, alot of passion behind it

  • 14 years ago

    by Good Enough

    A thought, A craving,
    While you gaze up at the stars,
    Diamonds scattered in the sky,
    But baby, someday they will be ours.

    ** i really like how u described this. very interesting.. my favorite part too.

    some thins i would change is the repeat of the word "the" its very repetitive.

    other than tht its a good poem

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