I like the line just as it is, no other words needed. A true love does make you feel complete, doesn't it. Very well done.

Seem would be ok. But I agree wtih sylvia its great just the way it is! Great style!

Great job! I don't think it needs to be changed either! It makes perfect sense the way it is! I LOVE this poem! It's very beautiful!

I like it the way it is. I love this poem

Its nice and simple...

Leave it as it is. I like the simplicity of this
poem for they are heartfelt words of love.
The last line of the final vesr you have a
typo "I'ill"
Take care

Such tender emotions not ruined with metaphors or words that have to be thought out. Your to the point in wonderfully flowing words.
I really enjoy your style

You've captured true love in this poem perfectly. The feeling of having them always on your mind, feeling as though youre one, having your fears subside when youre with them, everything falling into place, that sense of 'completeness' with them in your life, loving them til the day you die. There's so much more one can say to describe true love--it's such a strong feeling. Theres something someone told me a while back and it's something so true, someone doesn't necessary complete you yet--their love should compliment yours. I thought that was neat and nonethless the truth. [I hope that all made sense, lol] Well done, this was beautiful! [: