Felings Untold

by OYAY   Jul 28, 2009


I was very selfish
And didnt think bout how others felt
My heart was so hot but so cold
It felt that i'd literally would melt
From the way that it looked to me
It was going great
Late night on the phone
Going out on dates
Time had past just so fast
But it wasnt long time till it all came down
My spirit was once lifted high
But it suddenly came crashing down
I suffered a little bit
And i felt i'd never mend
But i didnt realized
Who was hurting the most, a friend
We shared the same ambition
But his was for real
He loved wat he loved
Me i just made the deal
His love for her
Was none i could ever match
If i could just rewind time
I'd take it all back
But the past is past
And the future is now
Might as well look up
'Cause im tired of looking dowm..........
TO BE CONTINUED

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  • 10 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Lulu

    I like it a lot! it reminds me of a situation that Ive been trough before

  • 13 years ago

    by dreamer

    I think that your poems are really great. and also have a meaning to them that relates to lots of people.

  • 14 years ago

    by Jad

    Altaire I have to say that this free verse poem was really good. The flow was good through out the poem and the emotion can really be felt and that is good. The meaning of this poem was good and you did a great job showing how you are sorry for what you have done and now you must move on. The poem overall had a couple spelling errors and that's about all so keep up the good work and keep writing. -Jad