Symphony of hearts (part 1)

by Goodbye   Jul 29, 2009


Rain is drumming my window
Cool summer winds blows in my room
Your note is on the table
Reminds me your presence
I miss you!
Every single letter of pain
All the points and question marks
Everything reveals your heart
Creeping silence behind my back
Something is dead
I can smell it everywhere
Ink on the paper turns to blood
I scream
So you would come again

Footsteps and fingerprints on the wall
Door half open
A candle lights up
Skinny fingers touch my hand
I turn my head
Soundless fear has landed
My heart jumps
I see your face on the mirror
Your hair is wet
Water drops are falling down
Your cheeks
Mixed with salty tears
Your mouth forms words
I love you
Your image disappears
I step into blood on the floor

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Edited a bit. Thanks for comments, they help me a lot. :))))

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  • 14 years ago

    by Kid Kurious

    I LOVE YOUR IMAGERY!!!

    You really captured a really cool horror/lost love theme here, really a great piece!

    hehe that one little critique has already been made, so now it is perfection! =)

    keep at it!

  • 14 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    Wow. This was an amazing write, and had a great deal of emotion behind it. Keep writing!