Loves Embrace

by Deana   Aug 3, 2009


Sweet, sensual, loves embrace
Tender kisses upon thy bed
Eyes the color of summer skies
Scattered petals of roses red

Touch of fire burns the soul
Surrenders the last reserve
Lost within this moments song
Clinging tightly to every word

Violent waves upon the sea
Quench this thirst for fire
Gentle power, a raging storm
Fulfill two hearts desire

Lovers lie entwined as one
oblivious to the rising sun

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  • 14 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    You painted a scene of such sweet love and affection. this was a very pleasant read =) 5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Oh, yes. Very strongly worded. Very emotional throughout. Well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Lovely flow and a very well depicted poem indeed. I liked the binding of the words. Very well written!

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Beautifully penned. Excellent flow and word choice!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    What a sensual poem, Deana:)

    Nothing forced about this write, it flowed and rhymed and made me see truly passionate images and it jiust oozes sweet love:)

    Gentle power, a raging storm
    Fulfill two hearts desire

    ^^
    It's funny how this can be gentle and forceful at the same time, but it is..unless you have a real brute on your hands, lol!

    Nice work, my friend!

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

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