When you love someone like this, walking beside and being there together is the most important part of love. Well done.

Nice job. Makes me want to fall in love oh wait already there lol
Love poems are so overdone, but you did a great job with this tender emotions and from the heart love.

Listening to the stillness,
As we stand beside the shore,
The waves beat like your heartbeat,
Telling me I can't want more...

That is the sweetness of love..a read that
leaves with a sigh :)

Olwin
what a very soothing poem of love.

just want to feel your heartbeat,
Beating close to mine.
Your arms wrapped tightly round me,
As you rest your head on mine.

There is no better place to be then in the arms of the one you love :)
Good job!
Love Cindy

I thought that this poem was great, raw emotions for a special someeone flow through your heart on this write. Again great work. I have to say my fav stanza in this poem was.

"Listening to the stillness,
As we stand beside the shore,
The waves beat like your heartbeat,
Telling me I can't want more..."

I remember doing that alot when I was a little younger, this poem was refreshing. Great work

Kerry Gardiner

Love it love it love it
Really amazing poem

"The waves beat like your heartbeat" this line is just sooo deep

I read this love poem more than 5 times really its wonderful , you chose so soft and tender words . well done

Again a lovely poem Olwin of which the recipient if any would be decidedly happy, well done

Grant

This was so beautiful, I think we all learn for a love such as thing. Great work.

Yearn*

A Most Sweet Write Olwin!!!