My suicide

by Tylor delcourt   Aug 7, 2009


Lil Amy is only 12 years old she lives in a world so cold, mom always high, dad always drunk, he abuses her, and rapes her every night.
she has ho friends, lies to the teachers about why she is always bruised up.
thinking no one cares. she packs her stuff and runs away. 6 years latter Lil Amy is eighteen years old with a baby she sits with at home, shes taking drugs while her boyfriends in jail who gives not a care in the world.
she starts to cut, and have suicidal thoughts. her boyfriend bails leaving Amy all alone in this shrew world we call home...
so much pain, she can not bare any more tired of pain, tired of life, and tired of who she has become.
one attempted suicide is all it took to jump off the building don't look. as she falls wishing she had lived a better life as she hits the ground. heart stops, breathing ceased, and body limp she is dead.
Now a condemned soul stuck to this pitiful world. Forced to wounder in total agony. "just one more lost soul added to the realm of the damned

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  • 14 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Wow...i really like this one...its pretty good...sad but good...5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Kianna

    I really like it. Its great, so full of emotion. [5/5]
    *KiKi

  • 14 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Omg this was crazy sad.
    It was so heartfelt
    I loved the worlds you threw into this.
    It was so amazing!
    YOu have alot of talent.
    The weird thing is this happends all the time.
    People get raped everyday
    People run away everyday
    Women take care of their children all by
    themselves though at times its the other way
    around.Life is tough Life is rough and It takes
    great strenth to stay here living everyday
    as another challenge.Some people cant
    handle eveything and its so sad. Its sad how
    many people actually do commit suicide.
    Everyday Someone is comiting suicide.
    Leaving there children here to go foster home
    to foster home wishing they actually knew
    their mother and father.
    5/5
    Take care,
    Kortney

  • 14 years ago

    by Lauren

    I really like this. You can feel the emotion and sadness in it. Its really good.