Picking the Lock.-Free Verse

"You can be so cold"

This first line didn't really strike me or bring me into this piece, I found it to be a little plain, it didn't pull me in.

"Boldly going where you've been
Countless times before"

I loved this wording here, and although it was only two lines it had me reading on.

"It's time for a change
Stasis does not suit you, my dear
All energy wasted constructing intangible walls"

This was brilliant, the wording and meaning was immense and the imagery came alive. I loved that last line the best, it made me read it over again, I just loved how you expressed yourself and what you wrote here.

"Without machine
Without power other than my own"

I would suggest making "machine" plural, to me it would sound better, just my opinion.

"I will destroy these walls
I will love you
I will suffer and I will sacrifice"

Second line: I would maybe add "unconditionally" after "you", just add more.

Otherwise, this was good.

"Whatever it takes to secure your freedom"

I liked the usage of "secure" here, it was used well.

"Whatever it takes to pick the lock on your cage
And though I may wonder, "How did you ever get there?"
I won't turn my back as you walk astray "

Great ending, it left me satisfyed. This was a beautiful write, much talent you hold, never let go of that.

5/5 from me, keep writing..

Take care and God Bless you, Child of God!

~MaryAnne