The title..I feel it could be "Where be thy shield?" too, just a feeling..I don't really know the old English well.

I must say I admire you for trying this MaryAnne, it is something I am going to try my hand at too soon..a real challenge:))

It has such a sad touch to it: the sanity that has fled from this poor devils head, causing him to do harm on others...

I loved this very much!

*applauding*

5/5 Ingrid

You did a very good job, I have never attempted this style of writing.. although Ive read it numerous times in books like Romeo & Juliet and other old stories. Anyways, you have impressed me here, and with that I have nothing else to say :) Keep it up.

I like the usage of language here and you
did well in writing this. The poem itself leaves
the reader with mysterious thoughts..good
write :)

A very well done attempt I really enjoyed reading this

Im in love wit ur poems lol